Eyes (A Pair of Katauta)

Eyes so beautiful
kept inside a Mason jar
after you have died.

I gaze into your
lovely soulless orbs, floating
wishing you were here.


The Spiral Artist was “trying to come up with something sweet one would say to a lover”. I gave him a hand. . .and a couple eyes. 😉 I rewrote my answer in a pair of Katauta (both 5-7-5).

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5 thoughts on “Eyes (A Pair of Katauta)

  1. Hey, “I” am supposed to bring the chills here! XD

    You’ve basically left me wondering how on Earth I am going to top this without resorting to black magic. It’s THAT good. Now where is my pentagram…

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