Good Dreams (A Tetractys)

I am
in need of
good dreams tonight.
Please lay down beside me so I can sleep
and promise me you won’t take them away
when I wake up.
I want to
keep them.


A double tetractys to not being able to remember dreams upon waking.

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4 thoughts on “Good Dreams (A Tetractys)

  1. There is something so sad about this, so bittersweet… it twists you all up inside because it is so fundamentally lonely, so overwhelmingly vulnerable that it hits hard, cuts deep and leaves you to bleed.

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